[eden cycle] A Division of Souls, Prologue

Finally! Just finished what had to be one of the most intense (and protracted) series of writing sessions I've had in quite awhile, and I think I'm happy with how it came out. Sure, it could still do with a bit of tidying up, but it sounds a million times better than the original. Hope you enjoy it!

( Book I, Prologue )

Of course, any comments/feedback are welcome!

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