[writing] ADoS: Coming Soon...

Okay, once I iron out the last few pages of the first scene in A Division of Souls, I am going to post the new version here for your perusal to see what you think. I should have it done by tonight (and if not, by this weekend). Slightly longer, but a HELL of a lot better than the version posted here at edencycle (f-locked over there, let me know if you'd like to compare and contrast and I'll add you there).

So yeah...that's what I've been doing in Spare Oom the last few days.

NOM

I bought one of these the other day--a San Francisco institution--and I'm finally getting around to eating it now.

YUM.

:)


EDIT: Oh yes--if you the read about the history of these on the site, that amusement park they mention used to be about a mile or so from where I live now!