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jon_chaissonI got about twenty or so pages into Christopher Paolini's Eragon and I had to put it down. Now, don't get me wrong, I thought the premise was good, but the style was just irritating me too much to want to continue.
I have to admit it's for two reasons, one of style and one for selfish reasons. First it annoyed me because, yes, I know it was written when he was what--fifteen or sixteen?--and yes, I know it's basically a kid's book, but it still bothered me that it read like a writer who really hadn't learned his chops yet. How do I know this? Because the style of writing is very much what my style sounded like when I wrote at that age. Very much along the lines of:
Character did this. He went there. He looked like this. He was wearing that. He thought this.
Next paragraph: Character thought this. He said something to someone.
Next paragraph...and so on.
Just very sparse, three-sentence paragraphs and a lot of boring noun-verb sentences. I really wish I could have gotten into it more, but it was just too damn frustrating to read.
Which brings me to the selfish reason: Hell, I wrote and the finished version of the IWN at that age back in 1987. Had I but known Eragon would get past the editors, that damn novel would have been finished and out of my head YEARS ago. ;)
I have to admit it's for two reasons, one of style and one for selfish reasons. First it annoyed me because, yes, I know it was written when he was what--fifteen or sixteen?--and yes, I know it's basically a kid's book, but it still bothered me that it read like a writer who really hadn't learned his chops yet. How do I know this? Because the style of writing is very much what my style sounded like when I wrote at that age. Very much along the lines of:
Character did this. He went there. He looked like this. He was wearing that. He thought this.
Next paragraph: Character thought this. He said something to someone.
Next paragraph...and so on.
Just very sparse, three-sentence paragraphs and a lot of boring noun-verb sentences. I really wish I could have gotten into it more, but it was just too damn frustrating to read.
Which brings me to the selfish reason: Hell, I wrote and the finished version of the IWN at that age back in 1987. Had I but known Eragon would get past the editors, that damn novel would have been finished and out of my head YEARS ago. ;)
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Date: 2007-08-31 06:58 am (UTC)Which should just say to you: Toss every finished or unfinished idea at a publisher. EVERY one. Don't let yourself decide if it's good or not. Don't let yourself decide if it's ready or not. Why? You're going to have to change it for their market ANYWAY...so it will never be ready unless you have a direct download to the editor's brain.
SUBMIT SUBMIT SUBMIT!