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[eden cycle] In which I get nervous.
Apr. 8th, 2011 03:51 pmI've decided that I'll be sending the first few chapters and synopsis (once I create a better one) of A Division of Souls to ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
dancinghorse for a critique. Though I've had many friends and family read it in the past, this will be the first time I've had a professional writer take a look at this particular story--aside from a few submissions in the early 00's of previous versions--so I guess I'm a little nervous. Not scared, just nervous. She already glanced at Love Like Blood a while back, so I know what I'm getting into.
Of course, I'm already of the mindset that I feel there's something still missing, but I'm not quite sure what it is. This is normal, considering I've had this story in my head for at least 13 or so years, and sometimes it's a hard to be somewhat impartial after being close for so long to it. Still, I'm open-minded, and I'll be glad to see what she makes of it.
dancinghorse for a critique. Though I've had many friends and family read it in the past, this will be the first time I've had a professional writer take a look at this particular story--aside from a few submissions in the early 00's of previous versions--so I guess I'm a little nervous. Not scared, just nervous. She already glanced at Love Like Blood a while back, so I know what I'm getting into.Of course, I'm already of the mindset that I feel there's something still missing, but I'm not quite sure what it is. This is normal, considering I've had this story in my head for at least 13 or so years, and sometimes it's a hard to be somewhat impartial after being close for so long to it. Still, I'm open-minded, and I'll be glad to see what she makes of it.
