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2025-09-17 01:53 pm

Midweek stuff

I have today off so this morning I headed over to Kaiser and got my combo flu and Covid shots. I figured I'd get it out of the way early this year so I don't need to worry about it! I've always had a bit of a bad habit of putting things off (not a terrible habit, just one that I've used more often than I'd like and mostly out of laziness and/or distraction), so lately I've been making sure I'm a bit more aware of it. 

Speaking of fixing habits, I'm still trying to get myself back into the daily writing thing -- I mean, other than working on my current revision projects. I really should go back to the journaling, at least. Doing that often got me into the mindset for writing each day, not to mention it being a bit of therapy to get my thoughts in order and lighten the mental or emotional burden.

Still, the only downside to wanting to do that is the near-inability to do that during work hours. I just do not have enough downtime, unless I take major steps to work on such things outside of the store. I mean, I'd really like to return to sketching out ideas during quiet moments on scratch paper, but there's more to it than just that -- I've also got to unf*ck my other terrible habit of Overthinking My Notes. I don't even remember where or when that started (I'm thinking it was at some point around the end of my time at the bank). And that's been a hard one to break.

Maybe what I need is a main focus. Decide on one specific project to work on and filter all my creative thoughts while I'm at work towards that one point.

Something to think about, anyway.
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2009-11-29 11:17 am

[Writing] Slowly getting there.

Man, that last chapter kicked my ass. It's hard to deliberately write a chapter where the character is purposely performing in a void--and reacting to said void. What can you do aside from have him react with 'this wasn't here before...'? There's only so many times you can have him have that reaction, and even when he figures it out, you can only have him think 'what should I do to change this' so many times before he finally does something about it.

That said--this chapter was pretty short, probably about five pages, and may or may not stay (bringing up the question "well, why write it in the first place?!??"), but it's done now, so there ya go. If I do use it, it'll most likely be retooled a bit, and a lot of additions in earlier scenes to build it up--specifically, building up the reason why he reacts to the void the way he did. Nothing too involved, just some character actions in earlier scenes that should build up to this.

So if anything...I probably have four more chapters to write, and then I'll be done. I've already done a bit of outlining--that is, the outlining I've done in the past, where I make very vague mapping notes on who ends up doing what, and where they end up. In this case, I made a list of all the primary and secondary characters and a word or two on their setting, to be used as triggering keywords. Most of them have been taken care of, but I now have four columns sigifying the next chapters. These columns basically just have the character names in them, with headers being another trigger keyword: Vigil, Trisanda, Denni, and Denouement.

That's pretty much how I've outlined in the past, and it's worked well for me. Doing an extended one like I did with Can't Find My Way Home probably hindered that story more than helped it...but that's another writing post altogether. For now, I'm working off this piece of paper (originally drawn up at work, natch). Hopefully if all works out, I'll have everything done by next month.

Woohoo, the trilogy's nearly finished!! :D
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2009-11-15 07:35 pm
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[eden cycle] Home stretch!

Reached 1193 words today over the course of a four hours (sidetracked by football and Holmes on Homes, of course), but Chapter 36 is DONE. I'm quite happy with this chapter--I feel it's some of the best work I've done in a long time. Sure, that isn't hard to believe, considering my last serious work was done quite some time ago, but still...I really like how this one worked out.

The next scene's going to be a tough one, though...I could have multi-POV in one chapter on this, or I could continue with the change of POV per chapter and draw out the ending LotR-style (sort of), but it's going to need a lot of POV nontheless. What happens next directly affects a goodly amount of characters of all tiers, and I don't want to leave anyone out, at least not in the first draft. Keep in mind, this isn't a post-climactic "this is what happened to everyone" ending--this whole passage is the climax of the novel and the trilogy itself, and this is what it all led up to, and it's not just affecting the main characters. And it's not just internal change, either.

This may take some time, but I'm hoping this will turn out great.

Also--still need to expand on Chapter 34. Major scene with D'kami/Saishourenzyoushu, and at five pages and only 1500-plus words, it seems a bit short. I may move it to post-Chapter 36, as I think it might flow a little better there...but we'll see.

Either way...I'm thinking right now, it's time for me to use the old standby for mapping out what I want to do--some scrap paper at work, frantically jotting down notes of where I want everything to go. May take a day or so, but I'm sure I can come up with something by then! Definitely looking forward to this...it'll be just like old times again... :)